Walt: Get excited to about year 6 camp
It was the day me and my friends were going to see Kawau Island and it’s wonderful inhabitants, so was all the year 6’s for 2018 at Pt England school. But nothing is as is seems at Kawau Island Four campers from the group will find a dark side of this Mysterious Island. Will they survive this Crazy Camp?
“Yay! I can’t wait to arrive at camp” I exclaimed not knowing what was waiting for us on the Island “I know right” Jedida replied as she pulled her suitcase onto the ferry. They found to seats next to Tha-zin and Roshaan “ Hey Tha-zin I heard the Mansion on Kawau Island is Haunted by the ghost of Governor Hobson” Roshaan said as she saw Jedida and Zaeeda sit down “maybe we invite the ghost to have candy with us at night when everyone's asleep” Zaeeda said pulling a block of cadbury M&M chocolates from her bag. They ferry stopped and they walked onto the docks of Kawau island, “Okay team quite down” said 2 loud and clear voices from in front of us. “Welcome to Kawau Island at this camp we will be doing team building activities this may be hard but I don’t want any complaining and in case you didn’t know my name is Erin” said the tall figure standing in front of us “ and my name is Peter but now we are going to hike up killer hill so get ready” He said grinning. “ I am so excited” I whisper jedida as we start walking in a line “Me too” she whispers back.
Once we finished hiking and spent the rest of the day doing fun activities but nightfall came and we were exhausted. “Today's activities were so much fun” Tha-zin says as Me and her walk back to our cabin “yeah fun right’’ I say sarcastically “ I am exhausted” I say back to her. They walked into the cabin and I pulled out my block of chocolate ready for a midnight feast “YEAH” they all shierked together “SSSSHHHHH” I hissed “remember Mr Somerville's talk about 10% of the candy” Roshaan whispers Quietly. The Next day they had did kayaking, hiking ,swimming and heaps of other cool activities with Peter and Erin. “I really wish we could do today over again it was so much fun” Jedida said to Roshaan and I walked to lunch together “yeah it was so much fun but did you notice the teachers are acting weird today” I said looking over her behind her and seeing Miss Parrant half asleep and Mr Goodwin with his eighth cup of coffee “I agree” Roshaan replied “ let’s ask them why they are so jumpy and asleep today” Jedida suggested “ok” Me and Roshaan replied together.
After lunch they walked up to Mr Goodwin who was sitting on a standing up talking to some boys about fortnite, Once he finished I decided to try and be polite and ask “ Mr Goodwin why are you and the other teachers so jumpy and half asleep today?” “ Me and the other teacher kept hearing noises in the Mansion it kept us awake all night” He replied then going back to the topic of fortnite with the boys. The girls walked away in silence and in deep thought “Maybe it was the ghost of Governor Hobson” Jedida joked “Actually you might be right” Zaeeda exclaimed.
That evening Zaeeda and Tha-zin walked into there cabin together only to find Jedida and Roshaan giggling and chatting in the corner “What’s up”? I asked suspiciously “you know how we were talking about the inviting the ghost of Governor Hobson to eat candy well” Jedida says allowing me and Tha-zin to build up some suspense Roshaan continued “ We did some research and found out that Governor Hobson isn’t dead yet he’s but he did go last week” Roshaan said mysteriously “ OOOOHhhhh I get it now, you guys want to go and find out why there is a ghost roaming the mansion” Tha-zin says brightly with wide eyes “good Idea I want In” Me and Tha-zin literally yelled they both agreed and found jobs to do. It was 10:00 pm and Jedida was sitting on a tree branch Roshaan was sneaking to the front door of the mansion. Tha-zin was sitting on the roof of the cabin keeping an eye out for any campers our teacher about to bust us and I was sittin inside the cabin looking through binoculars giving instructions on the plan and eating more M&M chocolate. Roshaan snuck into the Mansion and unlocked the door for back door for Jedida they snuck into they waited for 2 hours straight, when the clock struck twelve a tall pale figure came out of a from a secret cupboard that faded away into the walls of the mansion.
The figure walked towards the kitchen and grabbed out a really big knife the light of the kitchen was on and the only thing visible to the girls was his shadow and some type of thick liquid type of juice that bounced everywhere when he brought the knife down. The girl screamed in horror so I sent Tha-zin over to see if they were alright “Tha-zin Tha-zin please come in we need you to report to Haunted scene (Mansion) ” I screeched as I took another bite of the delicious goodness into the walkie talkie “Roger that” a voice said. Tha-zin soon arrived at the scene and walked into the kitchen by accident and saw that the ghost was dicing a tomato “but why Tha-zin wondered. Roshaan noticed something weird on the ground we the ghost had been she crawled over to it and got a sample into to a bag she then alerted me and I was already on my way I had got a backup agent to stay at home base. I ran over there and when I arrived all my friend were hiding in the living room staring at the shadow in fascination, I looked at the sample of white powder Roshaan had collected I took one look at it and thanks to the baking lessons my mom had been giving me I immediately said “it’s flour you know the type you put in cakes and stuff” I said to the others.
In horror Jedida yelled he’s on a move we followed him into a room where we heard shrieks, shrieks of Mr Goodwin they were of both laughter and fear. We peeked through the door and saw the ghost running around trying to scare Mr Goodwin but he is to intrigued in his game of fortnite he see the ghost and laughs but shrieked when he starts to lose in fortnite. “What should we do” Roshaan whispered desperately “I don’t know” Tha-zin replied “I know” a voice behind them said It was Amira and she was holding sponges and a bucket of water “Remember that time we threw sponges at our teacher for our writing test well we could do the same to the ghost to get the flour of him and reveals the true identity of this so called ghost. We each took turns loading up our sponges and throwing them at the ghost it took some time but we finally got the flour off Governor Hobson.
It turned out he was sleepwalking and woke him up by throwing wet sponges at him he told us that had took a sleeping pill before cause he couldn’t fall asleep but it didn’t work for a while he soon forgot about it and started baking a cake for his wife he was baking a cake for his wife when he fell asleep. “So that explains the flour” I say not very surprised “but what explains the sleep walking”? Roshaan stated “Hahaha I do that every night since I was a wee boy” The Governor replied with a cheesy grin “ok now I better get tidying up and you better get to back to your cabin and as for your teacher I will be turning off the mansions power no more fortnite for him” The Governor said will a sweet smile the girls giggled and returned to their cabin. “Wow we had such a crazy night” Amira exclaimed climbing back into bed “Amira you do know that it’s 4:00 am and we better get up now” I says trying not to offend her “Dang it” Roshaan said standing back up “we should keep this on a down low” I say “I agree replied Jedida “okay come on we better head out” Tha-zin yauwned reaching for the door.
The rest of the day the girls we really tired and this time the teachers asked them why we were all half asleep. The day to return back to school came and we were cleaning out our cabin we walked into the cabin and saw on the wall by the window there was writing on it PLEASED\ TO HAUNT YOU! The girls looked at each other and where silent for quite a while. “Do you think it was for real”? Tha-zin asked me “probably not” I replied uncomfortably but in my head I knew that it probably was for real and one day it would return and not to Kawau Island but to Pt England School BUT THAT’S A STORY FOR ANOTHER DAY!
Task Description: For this task we got given three story startes and we had to come up with the rest of the story. This story was based on the camp the year 6's are going on soon. I enjoyed this task however I did consider not being in it and just talking to the character on a walkie talkie but I kinda would kinda be hard to see how my friends act when I am not around so yeah. Anyway I hope you enjoyed!
It was the day me and my friends were going to see Kawau Island and it’s wonderful inhabitants, so was all the year 6’s for 2018 at Pt England school. But nothing is as is seems at Kawau Island Four campers from the group will find a dark side of this Mysterious Island. Will they survive this Crazy Camp?
“Yay! I can’t wait to arrive at camp” I exclaimed not knowing what was waiting for us on the Island “I know right” Jedida replied as she pulled her suitcase onto the ferry. They found to seats next to Tha-zin and Roshaan “ Hey Tha-zin I heard the Mansion on Kawau Island is Haunted by the ghost of Governor Hobson” Roshaan said as she saw Jedida and Zaeeda sit down “maybe we invite the ghost to have candy with us at night when everyone's asleep” Zaeeda said pulling a block of cadbury M&M chocolates from her bag. They ferry stopped and they walked onto the docks of Kawau island, “Okay team quite down” said 2 loud and clear voices from in front of us. “Welcome to Kawau Island at this camp we will be doing team building activities this may be hard but I don’t want any complaining and in case you didn’t know my name is Erin” said the tall figure standing in front of us “ and my name is Peter but now we are going to hike up killer hill so get ready” He said grinning. “ I am so excited” I whisper jedida as we start walking in a line “Me too” she whispers back.
Once we finished hiking and spent the rest of the day doing fun activities but nightfall came and we were exhausted. “Today's activities were so much fun” Tha-zin says as Me and her walk back to our cabin “yeah fun right’’ I say sarcastically “ I am exhausted” I say back to her. They walked into the cabin and I pulled out my block of chocolate ready for a midnight feast “YEAH” they all shierked together “SSSSHHHHH” I hissed “remember Mr Somerville's talk about 10% of the candy” Roshaan whispers Quietly. The Next day they had did kayaking, hiking ,swimming and heaps of other cool activities with Peter and Erin. “I really wish we could do today over again it was so much fun” Jedida said to Roshaan and I walked to lunch together “yeah it was so much fun but did you notice the teachers are acting weird today” I said looking over her behind her and seeing Miss Parrant half asleep and Mr Goodwin with his eighth cup of coffee “I agree” Roshaan replied “ let’s ask them why they are so jumpy and asleep today” Jedida suggested “ok” Me and Roshaan replied together.
After lunch they walked up to Mr Goodwin who was sitting on a standing up talking to some boys about fortnite, Once he finished I decided to try and be polite and ask “ Mr Goodwin why are you and the other teachers so jumpy and half asleep today?” “ Me and the other teacher kept hearing noises in the Mansion it kept us awake all night” He replied then going back to the topic of fortnite with the boys. The girls walked away in silence and in deep thought “Maybe it was the ghost of Governor Hobson” Jedida joked “Actually you might be right” Zaeeda exclaimed.That evening Zaeeda and Tha-zin walked into there cabin together only to find Jedida and Roshaan giggling and chatting in the corner “What’s up”? I asked suspiciously “you know how we were talking about the inviting the ghost of Governor Hobson to eat candy well” Jedida says allowing me and Tha-zin to build up some suspense Roshaan continued “ We did some research and found out that Governor Hobson isn’t dead yet he’s but he did go last week” Roshaan said mysteriously “ OOOOHhhhh I get it now, you guys want to go and find out why there is a ghost roaming the mansion” Tha-zin says brightly with wide eyes “good Idea I want In” Me and Tha-zin literally yelled they both agreed and found jobs to do. It was 10:00 pm and Jedida was sitting on a tree branch Roshaan was sneaking to the front door of the mansion. Tha-zin was sitting on the roof of the cabin keeping an eye out for any campers our teacher about to bust us and I was sittin inside the cabin looking through binoculars giving instructions on the plan and eating more M&M chocolate. Roshaan snuck into the Mansion and unlocked the door for back door for Jedida they snuck into they waited for 2 hours straight, when the clock struck twelve a tall pale figure came out of a from a secret cupboard that faded away into the walls of the mansion.
The figure walked towards the kitchen and grabbed out a really big knife the light of the kitchen was on and the only thing visible to the girls was his shadow and some type of thick liquid type of juice that bounced everywhere when he brought the knife down. The girl screamed in horror so I sent Tha-zin over to see if they were alright “Tha-zin Tha-zin please come in we need you to report to Haunted scene (Mansion) ” I screeched as I took another bite of the delicious goodness into the walkie talkie “Roger that” a voice said. Tha-zin soon arrived at the scene and walked into the kitchen by accident and saw that the ghost was dicing a tomato “but why Tha-zin wondered. Roshaan noticed something weird on the ground we the ghost had been she crawled over to it and got a sample into to a bag she then alerted me and I was already on my way I had got a backup agent to stay at home base. I ran over there and when I arrived all my friend were hiding in the living room staring at the shadow in fascination, I looked at the sample of white powder Roshaan had collected I took one look at it and thanks to the baking lessons my mom had been giving me I immediately said “it’s flour you know the type you put in cakes and stuff” I said to the others.
In horror Jedida yelled he’s on a move we followed him into a room where we heard shrieks, shrieks of Mr Goodwin they were of both laughter and fear. We peeked through the door and saw the ghost running around trying to scare Mr Goodwin but he is to intrigued in his game of fortnite he see the ghost and laughs but shrieked when he starts to lose in fortnite. “What should we do” Roshaan whispered desperately “I don’t know” Tha-zin replied “I know” a voice behind them said It was Amira and she was holding sponges and a bucket of water “Remember that time we threw sponges at our teacher for our writing test well we could do the same to the ghost to get the flour of him and reveals the true identity of this so called ghost. We each took turns loading up our sponges and throwing them at the ghost it took some time but we finally got the flour off Governor Hobson.
It turned out he was sleepwalking and woke him up by throwing wet sponges at him he told us that had took a sleeping pill before cause he couldn’t fall asleep but it didn’t work for a while he soon forgot about it and started baking a cake for his wife he was baking a cake for his wife when he fell asleep. “So that explains the flour” I say not very surprised “but what explains the sleep walking”? Roshaan stated “Hahaha I do that every night since I was a wee boy” The Governor replied with a cheesy grin “ok now I better get tidying up and you better get to back to your cabin and as for your teacher I will be turning off the mansions power no more fortnite for him” The Governor said will a sweet smile the girls giggled and returned to their cabin. “Wow we had such a crazy night” Amira exclaimed climbing back into bed “Amira you do know that it’s 4:00 am and we better get up now” I says trying not to offend her “Dang it” Roshaan said standing back up “we should keep this on a down low” I say “I agree replied Jedida “okay come on we better head out” Tha-zin yauwned reaching for the door.
The rest of the day the girls we really tired and this time the teachers asked them why we were all half asleep. The day to return back to school came and we were cleaning out our cabin we walked into the cabin and saw on the wall by the window there was writing on it PLEASED\ TO HAUNT YOU! The girls looked at each other and where silent for quite a while. “Do you think it was for real”? Tha-zin asked me “probably not” I replied uncomfortably but in my head I knew that it probably was for real and one day it would return and not to Kawau Island but to Pt England School BUT THAT’S A STORY FOR ANOTHER DAY!
Task Description: For this task we got given three story startes and we had to come up with the rest of the story. This story was based on the camp the year 6's are going on soon. I enjoyed this task however I did consider not being in it and just talking to the character on a walkie talkie but I kinda would kinda be hard to see how my friends act when I am not around so yeah. Anyway I hope you enjoyed!
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