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Thursday, 20 September 2018

Goat Island

Walt: write using humour.




Hi there I’m Susan Manawa and I am 11 years old, I live with my parents.I have a few friends and now that I have spent half a year her in Lycka Stad I have really fit in. My Favourite thing to do is to make little projects and for myself, yes I have to admit I am a bookworm some might even say a book slug cause I always have a book. My mom is a realestate agent and my dad is a builder my parents are really strict.





It’s Monday morning and I am on my way to school, My dads driving me my mom starts early. I am sitting in the back seat staring out at the kids walking to school. I felt super tired cause I stayed up video chatting with my friends. We hit some traffic and I take this as a chance to get a bit of shut eye. As soon as I felt the sound of my friends I woke up, I leaped out of the car said goodbye and went to join my friends, we gave each other hugs and waves as we walked over to class, I watched at my dad speed away in the fog until he was only a dot in the distance.





The Bell rings and we all everyone gathered on our big mat, I sat in the front row with my friend Marie. I watched and listened as my teacher carefully spoke. I was drifting off to sleep when my Marie elbowed me “did you hear that?” She asked “no” I replied a annoyed because she woke me up. Marie didn’t mind but she made me listen, “we are going to goat island” the teacher said I have a few notices for you collect them from your teachers when you return to your classes.





For the rest of the day Susan and Marie couldn’t sit still, at home time they walked home together, Marie didn’t live to far she lived around the block from Susan's house. Susan to the door waved to her friend then disappeared inside, “DAD” she yelled “Up Here her dad yelled from on the roof. Susan ran outside “dad could I please go to goat Island my whole team is going and I really wanna go” she pleaded. As soon as Susan finished dad came down and said “sorry you can’t go it isn’t safe and also remember we have food issues, Susan sadly walked upstairs. Sometimes Susan would think her parents do love her anymore.





She went to her laptop, and searched how to change parents minds. She found a interesting hack and decided to try it out. She did all her chores and got busy in the kitchen. Her plan was to make her parents see she is a good kid and bribe them to let her go. She would even pay the money for he to go, Susan thought it was an offer they couldn’t refuse to. The just had dinner and she sat them down and brought out a delicious chocolate pastry cake. “Mom dad could you please reconsider the facts of sending me to camp at Goat Island please” she said in a cool and calm voice trying to hide her excitement, her parents shot her a look they looked at each other and sighed they finally said “fine” said together “YAY” Susan said as she danced happily!







The next day the year sixes were going to camp Susan took her bag and she was off to camp with the other year six’s. When they arrived at Goat Island they unpacked the and went for a swim, they were about to jump into the water when a goat came up and head buffs the pufferfish as it is in the air if puffs up. Susan and her friends all laughed and shouted as they swam in the water Susan has swam out to a little when a dolphin swam up as, soon as it did the dolphin did a MEGA FART, Susan couldn’t help cracking up. Susan was super glad she went to camp!

Task Description: This Week we had to write a funny story, this was kind of hard but it was a great way to test out our writing skills. My story is about a girl going to camp and it was inspired by the fact that Pt  englands year 6's are going to camp in November. I hope you enjoyed !

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